I like your choice of synths, and I see you're trying do some electro house-ish stuff in the beginning. It's a good attempt, but I wasn't feeling it. I think some sidechaining would add some good depth to the section. It went back to your regular style after a while though, and I liked it. I'd say keep trying your electro house and practicing, and one day you'll make great electro house tracks. Keep on being awesome!
Great to see you branching off into new styles! I love the 8-bit feel that this has!
Funny thing is I was in the process of making a remix of this, but now there's now point in finishing it since yours is infinitely better. :P
Keep on making these awesome tunes!
Your chords, even though they are pretty simple, blow me away. This sounds almost like it belongs in minecraft. Calming, yet weirdly chilling. Especially with the effects you put in. Overall, great song.
Hey, thanks man. Really makes me happy to hear some comments.
Yeah, one of my favorites, It's got it's moments. Decent melody, and some pretty slick guitar noises. I sometimes forget it's a guitar that's making all that background sound and I ask myself "what the hell is that!?"
As for the melody, I forgot what it was, so I picked up my guitar and figured it out. I don't know if you understand the following, but here it is:
Cmaj7 to Dm7.
G7 | F7 | Em7 | Ebmaj7 | Dm7 | Dbmaj7 | Cmaj7
I did a bit of modulation in the bridge. Switched the Fmaj7 for a F7, to have Eb. and have that as a pedal note, and it also makes a bluesy bass melody. Learned that from Radiohead, they do a LOT of modulation.
Nice, a bit repetitive
I loved the build up, nice chord progressions. As the song went on, for some reason, the chord became major, and it sounded happy. Then the synth comes in at 1:29, and makes it distorted. It's a bit on the loud side, overpowering other instruments. Also, your percussion samples could be a bit better. It begins to get repetitive after a while though. Not neccessarily a bad thing, but 5 minutes of the same synth isn't exactly fun to listen to, is it? :P Also, there was no real climax, at any point in the song. I was waiting for some intense drums of synth to come in, but none did. D: I love the outro too. However, I felt the intro and outro didn't fit the song at all. Overall, nice song. Try to have some climax theory in your song to keep the listeners listening and interested. :D
hmm, at least i can make changes, to it, i'm going to work on this one a bit more. but thanks for the reveiw. and yeah it kind of doesn't have a climax, so i'll try to see if i can find where it would belong. ty
I liked the song, it's just that the piano doesn't really flow with the piece. Try adding some reverb on it or something. I liked the slowdown part at the end. :)
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